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The opening ceremony was indeed amazing. :D But I probably won't watch the games though, not too huge of a fan for sports. D:

Not granted. I wish for two wishes.

Banned for banning other people, just like everyone else here. D:

Yes, I am accepting requests for critiques. Please do ask me if you need a review for your story. However, I can't promise you that I'll always be around. :wink: ...

I am definitely not a writer. I write because I just need another outlet for my creativity. I like the idea of creating something unique, that's it, really. D: I ...

Though definitely not a proficient writer, I do plan a lot before I start writing. Planning is important if you want your story to be original. I mean, as people, ...

I liked how you tried to make the story enchanting and slightly magical in atmosphere. The descriptions were thorough and carefully done, but I think there are some details that ...

I write at my computer. If I write by hand, I usually make more mistakes and my brain refuses to process properly. D: However, if I must write by hand, ...

The opening felt like a tour guide trying to explain to people on where they're going to go, what they will be sightseeing and this and that.... D: I don't ...

Hmm... For some reason, this feels like a generic opener for a fantasy novel. Not necessarily a bad thing, many people love reading generic fantasy books, but just not really ...

Granted, you are now addicted to crack. I wish for no wish.

6/10

Quite a powerful piece of writing, bravo. As mentioned by some of the reviewers above, some of the description are indeed slightly too much. However, it's not really a major ...

That was a creative little story. There were flaws in grammar here and there, but I guess you could pick them out after reading it through yourself a few times. ...

Well, it seems like it's about time for me to have a more formal introduction about myself... First of all, I am not really an aspiring writer of any sort, ...